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Atherton kills foul.
Guns blaze, Turkeys fall, All eat.
Dinner tastes like lead.
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Heh...obviously, I didn't get my point across:)
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Post by adam atherton »

ollie is quite right.
i enjoy turkey hunting.
here is last years' bird:

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Post by Garr »

deek wrote:Heh...obviously, I didn't get my point across:)
Huh? You made a point?
I didn't see any point
at all in this thread.
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Post by Shaggydoo »

The Garr has spoken
Please let us end this thread now
No.....wait.....just one more!


Gotta watch Seinfeld
Kramer does Elaine tonight
George watches and whacks


OK I'm done...........
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Garr wrote:
deek wrote:Heh...obviously, I didn't get my point across:)
Huh? You made a point?
I didn't see any point
at all in this thread.
The point that a haiku is not simply writing 5-7-5 or counting syllables...but hey, what should I expect:)
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