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HillgrassBluebillyFTW
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dying day

Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

I'm going down south,
along that Memphis way.
I'm gonna see my woman,
Lord, on her dying day.

But I won't be sad,
oh no, I won't grieve.
See I love my baby,
but that b*tch was mean.

I'm gonna see my baby,
Lord on her dying day.
Takin my lovin' .44
to put her in her grave.

The preacher man came,
and spoke on the cross.
Said give your life to Jesus, boy,
before your soul is lost.

I know I done wrong,
I know I committed sin,
but if I saw my baby today,
I'd shoot that b*tch again.
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Post by cabmusic »

Very good and funny. This would surely be a hit song! I dig it. :lol:
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Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

funny wasn't really what I was going for... but I can see where you'd get it.

Thanks for the feedback.. glad you dig it.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

If you want to know what I am working on check out these sites:

OhSoHumorous.com
TopDailyMemes.com
RandomDailyMemes.com
BestDailyMemes.com
FortWayneMusic.om
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SoHumorous.com
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FaceFullOf.com
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FireFlyGoods.com
ThePeopleBlog.com
StealMyMemes.com
DontStealMyMemes.com

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