Contradiction

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HillgrassBluebillyFTW
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Contradiction

Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

Contradiction by Anderson

I am the eggman, I am the walrus,
how does it end? Will you write it for us?
You are the angel, your are the demon,
the words that cut, did you mean them?

I am the needle, I am the vein
bathing in whiskey, to take away the stain
You are the love, you are the torment
tear me apart to ease the burden.

I am the light, I am the sunrise
that steals the night from your eyes.
You are the song, you are the melody
you are the music that rescues me.

I am alone, and you are asleep
I missed the turn, you didn't feel a thing.
I am the word, you are the thought
but lately, I don't give a f**k.
1. I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener. 2. He cuts off every branch in me that bears no fruit, while every branch that does bear fruit he prunes so that it will be even more fruitful. - Romans 15

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Post by shattered existence »

Nice verses. This would make a good rock song. A lot of false rhymes. Just wondering though. After drinking the whiskey did your slurred speech make torment and burden sound alike, because those two words don't rhyme at all to me.

Oh yeah and neither do thought and fork. I mean c'mon man what the ....................Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (LOL!)
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Post by cwallace »

I think I need to remove the 'censor' for this forum after reading that...heh..

Should I?

Chris
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