Breakdown - Anderson

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Breakdown - Anderson

Post by HillgrassBluebillyFTW »

Pick myself off the floor,
lie in a pile on the couch.
My eyes are read,
wish I were dead.

And I don't know how to kill,
this feeling of you inside,
inside my chest.

It's not ok, I'm not okay.
I scream and scream,
I wish it were all a dream,
and I would wake up from it.

How can this be?
What happened to me?
I had it all, and threw it away,
now I wish for death every day.

Will I wake up, will I breath?
I'm not okay, I'm not okay.
I can't wake up,
it won't end.

I torture myself, with pictures of you.
And I still can't wake up.
Someone please stop me,
I can't stop myself, it's over whelming...
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Post by deek »

You've got some mighty strong feelings there, bud...

But, at least you are getting them out in a creative way instead of leaving them all bottled up inside. And as an aside, there is no single human being worth killing yourself over, even if it feels that way at times...

Keep on writing about it, keep on talking about it...don't be afraid to let it out, as that is the only way you will feel whole again, IMO.
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