Rail - Tuesday Night (repost)

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Rail - Tuesday Night (repost)

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Tuesday Night (Bartender)

Outside the Rail on a Tuesday night,
two young lovers, too much to drink, now they're in a fight.

I went inside but didn't have to go far,
cause I saw my punk rock beauty sitting at the bar.

Chorus:
Hey Bartender, mix us another one strong
while the jukebox plays another ol blue eyes song.

We'll have one drink for November, and one for regret.
Some drink to remember, others to forget.

She had blue eyes, and blonde spikes in her hair,
wearing a Misfits t-shirt and a whiskey stare.

She told me she worked in a tattoo shop up the street,
where vampires and prostitutes liked to meet.

Chorus:
Hey Bartender, mix us another one strong
while the jukebox plays another dean martin song.

We'll have one drink for November, and one for regret.
Some drink to remember, we drink to forget.

And we'll drink to the man who's lookin for a fight,
and here's to the lady contemplating her life.

Same old strangers with familiar looking faces,
avoiding their lives and their daily rat races.

Chorus:
Hey Bartender, how about another round
while the jukebox plays that oh so familiar sound.

We'll drink now, and forget november.
but never regret and always remember.
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Post by shark1966 »

Hey man...much better than the Crossroads. I like it. Solid images and intriguing lines..."blonde spikes" punk rock and Ole' blue eyes..interesting mix. Intriguing.
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Dont forget she had a beard, it made me cry in my beer
"YOU HATE US AND WE HATE YOU" BY THE WAY EAT MY F***
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Post by echosauce1 »

mod op,, he is bearing his heart. Wait for the director's cut...OK!?!
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Post by Modus Operandai »

My fault.... I get too retarded even for myself sometimes.

No disrespect... It's all love.

Sorry to any and all....

p.s. to those that are confused...
I have deleted my post prior to echo's (if this all seems wicky wacky...)
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You didn't have to delete your post. I was just kidding,
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I'd post my short stories here but....they are...how should I say...
"X" Rated.
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Ms.Massacre wrote:I'd post my short stories here but....they are...how should I say...
"X" Rated.
I want to hear them, and be in one of those short stories with you~~~
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Tri-State Killing Spree wrote:
Ms.Massacre wrote:I'd post my short stories here but....they are...how should I say...
"X" Rated.
I want to hear them, and be in one of those short stories with you~~~
I might have to let you take a peek at one or two...but you gotta promise you wont stalk me after reading them....
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But i want to stalk you
"YOU HATE US AND WE HATE YOU" BY THE WAY EAT MY F***
www.tri-statekillingspree.com b*tch

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Tri-State Killing Spree wrote:But i want to stalk you
I bet you do!
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Ms.Massacre wrote:
Tri-State Killing Spree wrote:But i want to stalk you
I bet you do!
lol your so full of yourself
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Tri-State Killing Spree wrote:
Ms.Massacre wrote:
Tri-State Killing Spree wrote:But i want to stalk you
I bet you do!
lol your so full of yourself

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