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by shark1966
Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:37 am
Forum: Gig Swap
Topic: IPFW Battle
Replies: 16
Views: 13609

Right. Fabric. I'm sure the shape and suggestive positioning have absolutely NO intended sexual imagery whatsoever.

Thanks for setting me straight.
by shark1966
Thu Jan 05, 2006 3:03 pm
Forum: Gig Swap
Topic: IPFW Battle
Replies: 16
Views: 13609

No band here, but if that's your mouth and tongue in your avatar, I would love to go out on a date!! :evil: :twisted: :oops: :lol: :? 8) :roll:
by shark1966
Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:12 pm
Forum: Written Word
Topic: ode to FWM.com (repost)
Replies: 4
Views: 6261

catchy.
by shark1966
Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:11 pm
Forum: Written Word
Topic: Not Today (and it's not very good)
Replies: 1
Views: 4805

"let the rain was away" that's another one of those overused phrases man. avoid it if at all possible.

This one doesn't really go anywhere for me or evoke anything really engaging. Too vague in a way.
by shark1966
Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:09 pm
Forum: Written Word
Topic: Rail - Tuesday Night (repost)
Replies: 13
Views: 10005

Hey man...much better than the Crossroads. I like it. Solid images and intriguing lines..."blonde spikes" punk rock and Ole' blue eyes..interesting mix. Intriguing.
by shark1966
Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:04 pm
Forum: Written Word
Topic: crossroads (unfinished)
Replies: 6
Views: 5218

Um, way too overused image bro. The crossroads is as overdone as the image of trains in a song, the devil, seeing the light, etc. You got to reach for somethng a little more pesonal, a little fresher.

You can do it Jimmy. :lol: